Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Day Dreamer

Oh, those piercing caramel eyes, that takes you now, from the Pacific canyons to the heights of Everest. You are swimming continuously in its rays, trying to bear the blizzard it lashes out every other second. It’s unwavering glances, striking you ever steadily, paralyzing you at the spot. A gaze that transfixes you in time… you don’t, you can’t even blink your eyes. Time is gone...

Snap! Snap! Comes the sound of two quick fingers, “Snap out of it!!”… Turn around, don’t bother…. It’s not even worth that much.

Oh yes it is, yes it is for those sweet caramel eyes.

Forget about them, you’re never gonna taste them.

Maybe so, but I just can’t resist them…it’s as addictive as chocolate.

Oh yeah?

Oh yeah…

It’s still addictive…. and addiction to anything is not good…. so wake up!... Can’t you see you are playing a losing game?...

I knew I’d lost already before starting.

Uh?...

More fun lies in at least trying to capture what you can’t rather than actually capturing something that you can.

You’ll get nothing that way

No…you do get more out if it than anything else…

I don’t understand…

It’s better that you don’t…

I see… so you are the least bit bothered about the answer then…

I already know the answer

What are you going to do?....

Snap!! Snap!!
Blink… Blink… “Hey!, I’m holding a party at my place this afternoon. I’d love it if you could make it... really? That’d be awesome!.. See you there!”
God no!! don’t smile!!... don’t…. There it is, the smile, the only thing more addictive than the eyes. She walks away… you’re transfixed… …

Snap!! Snap!!... Man! Just die….just do it!

You walk up to the wastepaper bin, tear up the enveloped letter that was behind your back all along, and watch it fall… fall into darkness. The letter itself was blank.

15 comments:

Krshna said...

hey man its okay! you can always get another pair of caramel eyes...just find an eye surgeon!

nice post mate

nila

Dhananjai or dhanu said...

its diferent..nice

Barath said...

@nila
yea... i culd find an eye surgeon nd take the eyes... but who'd be the loser in the end!!...id hav the eyes! lol

thnx

@dhanu
itz okay
i already kno im a schizophreniac...

Vishesh said...

dream n dream big...ya it is more fun thinking stuff u can never have u relish it more that way ...

hrushita said...

aeey!..nice ,"relieving post"..lol..good one seriously!

Anonymous said...

thou shall not use the term 'blink...blink' because it has been licensed and copyrighted under the name of aditya nair.thank you.

Suri C said...

WTF

Anonymous said...

hey!
wow, i really dont know what to say
you really shouldn't bottle up stuff like this!
nice post though :)

btw, are my eyes that piercing?

Barath said...

@vishesh
yup... always gotta aim higher :)

@hrush
relieving eh? ...interrrsting

@web police;)
i think u guyz shld chk adi's legal docs again... i think we're talkin abt fraud and forgery here... plz get bac to me.. i wanna make sum money on this :p

@suri
v got all our critics here! ;)

only thing is, most of em make wrrong assumptions based on nuthin at all... tht'z weird!... i kno!

@caramel eyes
hmm... yea i guess ur rite..

nd ur eyes... the piercing part of it... well it really depends on whoze caramel eyes...?

come to think of it... all caramel eyes r tht piercin ;)

priya said...

nice to hav inspired someon to write somethin..

Barath said...

@priya

yea well kudos to u!!

u always need inspiration to write sumthin.. hmm... nd in dis post.. itz u!
yey!;)

atul said...

lmao.. nice post.. priya's comment really made your year rite ??

Barath said...

@atul

thnx...

abt the 2nd part of it...
EVEN ONE EFFIN MONTH AINT OVER OF THIS YEAR!!!

:)

Jayasindhya said...

was dat envelope by any chance,"D GREEN ENVELOPE" ??? hehe:P
nice post btw..

Barath said...

nope... for these purposes only pure silky white envelopes r used :)