Enchanting Existence
This here is another poem on love, this time some thought went to it... so it does have a bit of meaning if you try to understand it. The feel of poetry is always more important than the meaning behind it.
Love, classic conflict
Twixt sentiments distinct
Amusing, when one tries to deny
True affection being puerile,
By reasons of peculiar skepticism,
More than elusive mysticism,
Yet, one doesn’t know the inner feeling
Which hides far beneath every feeling
Love, pure and immaculate
Thought of as an euphoric enigma,
One doesn’t describe it,
Rather shouldn’t describe it,
For essence is lost
If one is able to decipher it
Uncertainty romances romance
Certainty revolts romance
Now and then,
Bitter as Californian cranberries
Then and now,
Sweet as Swiss strawberries
Making men lose rationality,
Rejoice in reflective spoonerisms
Succumb to sober solicitations
Crack concomitant contradictions
Tussle with tempestuous trauma
Awaken quiescent quintessence
Dissolve deific virginity
Confide confidential ineptitude
To love to be in love,
An enchanting existence indeed
11 comments:
hey .. one suggestion b'rat,,, poems are not supposed to make you look up dictionaries, and to be frank i couldnt make out half the words... this poem might tantalize and swagger walking dict's... but to mere mortals and tangible, threadbare chestnuts like me... its not a bit interesting...
no offence meant and i commend your hard work done on this.. but try a simpler language next time... should touch more hearts than only kanti as you do of now...
cheers.. t
nice 1 man!!!!!
can see a lot of heart work in it-)
nice topic to write upon to....
u in love?....semms so to me.
@tariq
actually, i meant it to be tht way... esp. the last stanza... wher basically all wht im tryin to tell is tht the guy in love makes things 'complicated' for himself ..and does strange things he normally doesnt do..
yea i shld show it to kanti.. mayb she culd break her head on it
oh u 4got valsi too.. sry.. oh yea she wuldnt udrstnd too..lol
mayb priya, young author n all... clap clap clap...i guess she mite understnd... a bit at least
oh... my gf wuld like it too.. come to think of it... shed like nythin i write, evn if i dont
well, i guess all my poems are a bit complex.. mayb ive inventd a new style of poetry>>!
@vishesh
uh... well, if u think im in love coz i wrote dis poem... nope.. dis one i wrote for the heck of it...
besides everybody loves to do sumthin whn bored!... i prefer writin highly byzantine poetry!
(uh...byzantine means complex)
*BLINK* *BLINK*
young author says, 'i pity your gf'
@priya
ha ha ..very funny! ;)
*nd "blink..blink" is copyrighted material
@barat if u want a proper complicated poem...
i ll show u 1.....wait 4 a couple of days im editing it...
i think it is 162 lines...
lol!!
simply superb! get goin! fallen in lovee!!!!!
Yo Man in love nice going. happy for u. Simple lucid ideas with complex words of eternal beauty. ur heart immersed with commitments of love . drop in and say hai and check out my blog Barath.But yet it ............ blah! that shall be filled up later.
if u got what it takes to be a man then check out my "An ASsasination" Article in my blog.
blink....blink...readin dis for da 9th time.....but i still dont seem to get it!!!blink....blink
lovely poem...
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